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Wednesday, November 24, 2010

Chapter 1:FRIM

Woke up early,today Juliet and her few friends were going to FRIM  a nature reserve.

      Before they went there they check 'the list'. "Cameras? Money?Bags?" said her friend Canilia. "Yep" everyone said. "Let's GO!"
  
     When they reached there.... "Let's go to the 'Food Court'," said Josh. "WHAT?! We just ate!" said everyone. "OK,fine..." said Josh hungrily."What about the waterfall?"suggested Tiffany and Shellyn."Alright "said everyone, only Josh growled.
  
      When they got there,there were only a few people. They climbed the muddy 'staircase' and when Caroline saw a caterpillar, she kept poking it with a stick.They went into the freezing cold water for 5 minutes .They walked back down, the 'staircase' was more slippery than last time. Mike almost fell if Chris had not grabbed his hand.
    
     They went to the canopy walkway next,there was not a sound except Austin's big mouth.He kept complaining about the place until Justin and Canilia told him to Shut Up. After that, we went to have lunch .Josh said :"FINALLY! FOOD!!!!". He ran into the food court as fast as lightning. 

    We all ordered something of our choice. For some reason,Josh's food took the longest time. When his food came everyone was going to faint. "You're really going to eat that big pile of food???"said Juliet amazed. 'Yep' was all he said before he started eating.
 
    After an hour or so Josh got a stomach ache. "Serves u right" said  Justin as he rubbed stomach oil onto  Josh's stomach. Time Flies When Your're Having Fun, It was already evening. They got onto the bus that took them to FRIM (they're only between 9-11 years old). 

   They went to Juliet's house because tomorrow they are going to....... CHINA! The boys slept in the guest room while the girls slept in Juliet's room. The girls slept at 11.00 p.m. while the boys slept at 12.00p.m. because they were watching movies. Their flight was at 7.00a.m. tomorrow. (My guess is that the girls will wake up earlier than the boys!)

This story is based on a totally FAKE story i own the characters but i do not own their names nor frim.... Stay tuned! Next post will be on Saturday if i am free.
 

2 comments:

  1. I wonder if Joshua Kor-kor inspired you to name the gluttony character "Josh". Haha. Nice work Jo Yi, keep it up!

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  2. Thanks!Actually no my friend is the gluttony character but I can't use his real name here!

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